The current job description has a good level of detail and uses appropriate HTML tags for structure. However, it contains some inconsistencies and redundancies, such as conflicting location details ('Poynton' vs. 'Alderley Edge') and overly lengthy paragraphs that could be more concise. To improve clarity and professionalism, I will organize the information more effectively, remove repetitive content, and correct location discrepancies while maintaining all essential details.
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