The provided job description contains detailed responsibilities and qualifications for a Security Manager role, but it exhibits several issues that warrant refinement:
* Overuse of lengthy, complex sentences reduces readability.
* Repetition of some points (e.g., reporting and emergency response planning appears twice).
* Inconsistent formatting, such as the use of tags and the presentation of sections.
* Some sections are redundant or overly verbose, which could be condensed for clarity.
* Use of HTML tags is appropriate but could be optimized for better structure and readability.
Therefore, I will provide a refined version that improves clarity, consolidates repetitive points, and enhances formatting while maintaining the original content and intent.
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